That poem, made me feel as if I could see it. Great poem.

This poem was so emotional and so very powerful. It was surprising and it took me another read to fully understand the real story inside. But once I read it again, I understood and could feel everything that the person inside it was feeling. Your vocab was very advanced for me, but it added to the poem that much more. It was perfect. The ending scared me, but it was also answered the questions I had. The gift... and why the person was crying... and why he came back to it 11 years later. I think this is the best poem I have read. It was very creativly written. Great job!!

@_@... WOW
a superbly poignant write.. i am here..with my eyes wide..i cn evn blink..AMAZING PIECE.
and had that "OH-what-an-end" to it..
superbly sad yet so amazing.

the wordings were excellent..
love these lines,,

"..It cut me deep, for I always new,
I'd never be an angel and take flight.."

simply great..

A truly awe-some write.
keep it up.(i know you're strong.)
and dont stop writing...

~Wake~

Wow! That was simply amazing! It was very suspenseful and throughout it I kept wondering what would happen. I thought you wouldn't tell what was in the box at first until I got to the end. Definitely a 5/5

*Speechless*

Whoa..Okay. That was amazing!! Sad and unfortunate, of course..but the story and the way you wrote it is Magnificant!! Excellent Work! ..This deserves nothing less than a 5!

5.5**
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Its like i can see everything playing like a movie in my head. really good poem i wish i can give you more that a 5

That was great

This one almost made me want to cry. It was very beautiful! 5/5

Oh wow. this is friggin amazing. if my heart wasn't so cold, i would cry. i don't even know what to say that could even begin to sum up how i feel about this piece. it's just...amazing. i loved the ending...i certainly didn't see that coming. There's not a thing i would change about this. just...perfect.

Absolutly amazing write. I feel i just want to put my arms around you, your pain leeks out with every word, and just when you think things are looking up it falls again, very sad but brilliant poem, well done. YOu have got a talent x