This is a very nice poem! Its mostly very smooth, it has a few ruff edges but its still really good... I guess just some spots have less flow... But that could just be me! I like your message! Its clear, and strong! I also like the length, you did just keep going on, it was the perfect size! Anyways, very good write, hope to see more, good job =)

~*+Megan+*~

THIS IS REALLY GOOD I LIKED IT AND IT MADE ME THINK .. YOUR LUCKY BECAUSE NOT MANY PEOPLE CAN MAKE ME DO THAT LOL NO BUT REALLY IT MADE ME THINK I LIKED IT KEEP IT UP =]

Omjebus i love it !!!!