Superb

This was well written, worded well and flowed pretty well too.
Sad and emotional, yet hopeful and uplifting. Love Tara-Kay
x

Hmm.. i really like this poem, great imagery, i thought of several things...a painting, a poem, a story..nice!!
5/5!
mezmeryz

Good imagery. Some errors yet does not overly mess with the flow. It's a little different with the content giving it more of a...dark and sadd-ish undertone that adds to the atmosphere. I like how the first line instantly grabs attention. The ending also goes nicely with the rest of this piece.
~Faith-less