by Baby Rainbow
Very good writing and i like the idea of your poem xx |
by Alma
As we get older our relationships and lives get more complicated we loose the innocence and ignorance of being young when all we cared about was having fun. You captured this perfectly! 5/5! |
Awwww thats really cute...... |
by gabriella
Cuz we all know tomorrow gonna be better |
by El
Great poem =) |
by Jenni
This was a very reminicent poem. I really enjoyed the emotions you portrayed in it. Everything was so raw, and this poem gave me an insight on how you view your past. Very good. 5/5 |
by Lizaveta
Aww i can completely relate.that is the poem i wanted to read now because i feel nostalgy. this one expresses this feeling so well. |
by Live WeLL
Wow this is a really great poem.. and i really enjoyed reading it.. i can relate to this one a lot.. i def wish I could go back to better days.. |