by Twisted Heart Sep 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
Your love has cast a spell on me |
by Angie
"its simply perfect, the form, the flow, the rhyme, from the moment I read the title I was, "bewitched" and "under the spell" I got so caught up in this write, it's beautiful and was a real pleasure to read, not one typo and I am a stickler for spelling...." |
by Synh
I didn't like this one as much as I did 'The Night That Sees My Pain'. It wasn't your best but it was still a nice read. The only thing is that some of your lines seemed to long for the rest of your poem and one line was to short. It wasn't a lot, more like 2 or 3 but it did throw me off a bit. Other than that, this poem was amazing. I don't like love poems that well but I think this one is an exception |
by Tricky Daze
It seemed much like a fairytale and it was so breathtaking |
by Cindy
Jeannie |
by K3LS3Y
DAT WUZ rEALLy G00D!!! ii rEALLy LiiKED iiT!!! :-) |