by Kaz Sep 8, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Many faces pass me by, |
by StormyStar
Awl! this is so sad! 5/5 lol |
You created great atmosphere through the poem, filled with emotions, especially sadness, and expressed your feelings excellently. The flow is little off in some places but that don't ruin whole impression too much. All in all, great job on this piece. |
by amelia
Beautiful poem again !! |
by Angela
This is good... |
by Xxcrazy4UxX
I love your poem, its sad but what ever comes from the heart is the best.. im addin' this one to my favorites.. becuase i ablsolutly loved it.. :] |