I like this poem because i can really relate great poem

Excellent poem sad but well written and comes from the heart , thats what makes a poem a poem, you express your thoughts and feeling so greatly wonderful job ,and cheer up life will get better , Trust me I know better than anyone in the world, you have great talent , make it work for you and always hold your head up and be pride of who you are , everyone else will start to see the real you and respect you for that ,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

I added this to my favourites :] I admire how you just summarized every feeling I had about life. Thank you for that. I felt like I was right there, walking wiht the person. So close. So real. So intense o.O I felt it. 5/5 seriously.

It's a really good poem, you should be proud! =)

I love your poem, its sad but what ever comes from the heart is the best.. im addin' this one to my favorites.. becuase i ablsolutly loved it.. :]

<3 abby

This is good...
i love it <3
E X C E L L E N T
i am going to read more

Beautiful poem again !!

i guess u bring out the reality of life

that we're born alone... we'll die alone !!

i guess nothing else matters...

gr8 work
keep it up

thanks for commenting on my poems

love
amy

You created great atmosphere through the poem, filled with emotions, especially sadness, and expressed your feelings excellently. The flow is little off in some places but that don't ruin whole impression too much. All in all, great job on this piece.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

Awl! this is so sad! 5/5 lol