Comments : Without Words

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx soulful poet xX

    Awwwwwwww love it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Leah

    Sweet. I love this poem. I'm so voting on this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Your poem kind unique... but i can't feel the satisfaction of it... cos its only 1 stanza... its look like a quetation or quotes not an poem... can you put some more... cos for me... its not yet finish... cos its cute the first stanza and i love it i swear... but still i can't feel the satisfaction... i hope you get my point... 3/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    The eyes can say alot....if one but looks deep into them.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    Gorgeous.
    I don't need to ellaborate ... but i can't control my fingers sometimes.
    This is a much better poem than i think you are getting creit for, i guess some poeple will see it lacking a rhyming structure and automatically mark it down. My comment to them .. Understand literature before you judge.
    This is a wonderful little poem, and here for me; size does matter. I always find that a small poem sticks in your brain like a needle. Long poems are hard to remember.

    Everyone that has been in love at some point wishes they were able to say what they felt without needing to put it into words. That is summed up here perfectly.

    My only criticism would be the last line "Threw" is to throw "Through" is from one side to another.

    Still ..
    Beautiful sentiment.
    Wonderful subject.
    Brilliantly penned.
    Marvellously portrayed.

    [5/5]
    ~Pete.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Amazing! So short and sweet yet packs so much power behind those few lines..
    I'm lost for words..
    Well done!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel

    Short but sweet, PERFECT haha. I'm not good at this type of poetry but you did a great job. Very well written, keep it up, i gave it a 5/5 :D Also I'd LOVE it if you'd read some of ym new poems and comment/RATE them. Thanks SOO much!
    Rachel

  • 17 years ago

    by Airika

    Short but meaningfull..=] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Munequita

    I think maybe u should have added more but i still like

  • 17 years ago

    by LiViNg To DiE

    WOW wonderful poem
    i rilly like it i know exactly how you feel...
    :):):)
    talk to you later...