by 6CuDdLyBeAr9
| I have a question.. is the dad any kind of coach in perticular? Bcuz I have this same feeling.. i lost my dad a year ago and he played guitar.. so i can relate to this poem! | 
| Wow hun.. its a really nice poem.. hopefully the time will ease the pain of your loss, if you ever need to talk just send a message.. 5/5 | 
by cory
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            This poem it very touching and it had great flow.5/5 | 
by Becca
| I love relationship you portrait in the poem. I loved it. 5/5. | 
 
    by SamanthaRose X3
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by Niinaa
| Very touching poem --- and im soo sorry about the loss | 
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            Im sooo incredibly sorry for the loss of your dad. i would never be able to g othrough something like that. |