THIS IS GREAT. I REALLY ENJOYED IT. 5/5

Same as the other ones i've commented,
this is awesome..it rhymes so well..try to use more deep words

keep it up!

This poem is so beautiful. I read it and memories of me and my ex started rushing through my mind. I can relate to this piece in so many ways. I loved how you kept almost every line in this poem the same length and rhymed it all up. Great job! Please keep up the awesome work. 5/5 <3 <3

~Rikku~