Abosolutely Amazing.. the feelings flowed intensely and packed an impact.. a great write..
loved these lines..

"..every piece will find it's place
and every man always finishes the race
no matter if you're late
you have to let it out
let it flow and just go.."

a superb piece ..
LOved It ! :D
keep it up

~Wake~

A very nice piece, nicely worded 5/5
keep up the good work

I get your point and its a strong one. but ifound that the poems dosn't have a real flow all around nice tho.