This is great, great, GREAT.
and it has just had 5 visits. How very sad!
I shall try to write a Triquatrain soon. it's so lovely :)

Marjan

I can see that you like to write with poetry foems
And to be honest you use them good

My fave lines are;

Caught just a glance, of pixie's dance
Upon the wash of white
The sparkle wings, sweet fairy dreams
Come calling on this night.

Beatifully penned,
Laura

Good poem. I just have one itsy bitsy problem . . .

'Then close my eyes, winter's lullaby'

Lullaby seems like you were trying to force it into your poem, almost as though you thought of the title before you wrote the poem and felt the need to put it anywhere. It kinda threw me off but not really. Just be a little more careful about forceful words.

But this is a very beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. You don't read very good Misc. poems anymore, which is kinda sad. All you read now are love and depressing poems. This was a nice change of pace. Great job :)