I ask

by I walked into my nightmares   Sep 9, 2007


What's this planet earth
full of death full of birth
we all ask the same questions
why do die
why do we live
we should all know the answere
we live to die and we die to live
i ask
why are there so many with anger in their heart
why do we never finish the things that we start
what's with this quest for happiness and joy
you know i think its all a ploy
to get us to succeed
which is really on greed
just to fit in
we must be beautiful, we must be thin
we all want fame, we all want riches
but we never stop to help those who live in ditches
always thinking of our self
our self and no one else
so why dp we live
i'll tell you why we live
we live to give
and why do we die
we die when there is nothing left to give
but, what is left inside

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  • 16 years ago

    by sirusthevirus

    It a really good damn poem

    i like a lot.

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by I walked into my nightmares

    Oooooooooo
    ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by I walked into my nightmares

    Yess comments

  • 17 years ago

    by I walked into my nightmares

    ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Great poem! kinda has the "woah" ending u know...
    a couple of things though
    "we must be beautiful and thin"
    i think it kinda kills the flow...maybe if u make it like this
    "we must be beautiful, we must be thin"
    it flows better....(in my opinion ofcourse...)
    anywho...a definite 5/5 from me....deep poem..=D

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