by lish Sep 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
As I sit here in my corner |
by Crystal Gaze
Full of emotions, the flow stayed on track, and you managed to get the message out clear and strong. |
The theme of this well written poem has moved me emotionally. I am at a loss for words at this moment |
At first, I love your rhyme scheme. Then I'm amazed with the flow> And also you make me drown to the emotion. It's an excellent one!!!! It's worth 5/5!!! |
by Sweet lig
I love the whole story and all the words behind of this poem. there are lots of emotions that i can truly relate. it has a dept meaning and the whole stanza are truly expressed very well....very touch and sad piece! i enjoyed it 5/5 |
by Nowhere Man
Wahahahaw! you're getting better and better, huh.. |