Greetings....compliments on a fine piece, almost everything worked well for me, the choice of wording was immaculate, and the over all feeling was very positive, if you twist my arm really hard the only criticism i would have is that i am a rather visually oriented person, and it got a little foggy in spots, but thats NOT a bad thing, it's a great piece...anda deserves a 5...and i also sent you a message also...thanks for the read..

I liked this one too, its quite random, but its got meaning. i love your use of vocab =]
keep it up! 5/5
mezmeryz

"look, mirror reflection,
it can make you believe,
same as the old fictions,
that made youths naive,"

AMAZING.... The word choice was amazing and I think that you have written a great piece... I cant think of anythign bad to say

keep it up!!!

Hey a very well penned indeed.. you brought up your own style and uniqueness. but to be honest with you, i'm trying to dig my head because i'm kindda confused. what's the relation of making clones (juxtapose, as u call it) with the meaning of this piece? or maybe i misunderstood the hidden meaning and viewed it in a different perspective? but anyway, i love the wordings and so as the imagination on this piece...keep it up!!

I really like this one. It made me think, which is always a good thing. I loved the metaphors you used..and how you talked about a copy being not even near the real thing and how it just ruins original beauty. At least thats what I gathered from it. Its always great to be able to give your own interpretation to someones poem. Good flow as well! Keep up the good work.

I've never seen this subject written about before 5/5 Fantastic