by Alyssa Agony Sep 9, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Take down the pictures of us. How could i be so silly to think you loved me and we would last forever. All the times you said I'm sorry babe it will never happen again. How could I be so naive ? Now I see how much you hurt me. I can now look in the mirror you gave me and the scars I gave myself. Maybe one day I can look past them and see me not the pain or the broken heart that rests in my ribcage. I hope that day is near, so I can forget about you and the pain you put me through but for now I will just have to wait for that day to come. |
by ECILA ice
Nice emotions and message are clearly portray in it.. but i suggest to reconstruct it again to make it look more of a poem than an ordinary message to someone. Hey, u can also read some of mine.. |
Wow nice poem truly i know what you mean 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |