Misty Reflections

by dollwithafrown   Sep 9, 2007


The cold frost of newborn January bites my skin,
And with each sharp pain my heart beats within.
Wrapped up in warmth, from head to toe;
I'm hiding the pain, hiding the pain
...I don't want them to know.

I'm down by the lake, it's a quarter to four.
The memories inside break down to their core.
I remember the beginning, how perfect it was.
I could not see then, I could not see
...How filled it was of flaws.

I stare into the water, like we did last year,
The reflection I still see, every word I still hear.
Yet it's become a little misty, covered with time;
I must accept it, I just must accept:
...You are no longer mine.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I love this one, i am glad I chose it. This is where I am right now, sad, but truthful. Really nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Noel

    This poem is.. soo wonderful.. it exactly describes everything i feel towards my ex right now.. even the little stuff like january and being down by the lake.. and how perfect things were and now accepting that he's gone.. and overall how it hurts and the memories.. i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Awehh ! Why this has no votes or comments yet I don`t know...I loved it. The flow, the imagery...everything was perfect. It was so relateable for me and I think that is a big part of what pulled me in. The ending was a perfect ending for this. Great job hun :]

    5.5
    :]

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