Nice poem..........nice writen....but i coundnt relate because i dont know how to write dark poems..hehehehe ang babaw peo ganda poh...5/5 ^_^

Hey, first i like the title and nice wordings.. honestly, i can picture out a corrupt and chaotic ( whew! ami exaggerating?)government and one stands out among those (i mean stand and fight for proper justice). is that so? if not,l just wondering who are you referring to?

ok back to it, though i find the poem common and read such setting a lot of times you just made it somehow different from the rest. Keep it up! Good work..

It rhymes so well..but honestly i don't get the picture..haha maybe i don't usually write dark type poetry

5/5 for it!

The consecutive rhymes are really cute and your pen is a rhyming pen in this piece. loved all the lines and the flow ;)

Tc
Fsams

The consecutive rhymes are really cute and your pen is a rhyming pen in this piece. loved all the lines and the flow ;)

Tc
Fsams

I don't like rhyming too much, it isn't necessary, I want to say that I think (and this is of course just my opinion and I want to offend you) that this poem would be better without rhyming and forced rhyming leaves bad impression.
Anyway I love imagery, it is absolutely captivating and few lines here are fantastic! Very unique, also you wrote this piece greatly, I will read more of your work because I enjoy in your writing.