Mute aches

by ECILA ice   Sep 9, 2007


Stifled voices stranded in my throat
Words are crumpled beneath my tongue
Suppressing helpless cries
by keeping it all in my lungs

Dampened screams that turn to squeaks
Still I dare the words to come out
But it seems it have been locked up
Between those voiceless shouts

I gathered all my strength
To break this unbreakable silence
I breathe hard, tried to utter
Trying to spill a single sentence

But as I murmur through the empty atmosphere
Reciting your name in the air
All I could ever hear is the cold wind
Answering my hopeless prayers..

** thanks to THE TASTELESS for his help and correcting some of my mistakes =p..

**well all i wanted is to let him know what i feel for him but i don't have enough guts to do so..

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  • 17 years ago

    by darkenlight1

    Wow. this is a beatiful poem

  • 17 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Loved it all i can say is i love the emotion

  • 17 years ago

    by Patience

    This piece was well expressed and the emotions were stong. Over all just a beautifully written poem. Well done. : )

    Cicely

  • 17 years ago

    by Patience

    This piece was well expressed and the emotions were stong. Over all just a beautifully written poem. Well done. : )

    Cicely

  • 17 years ago

    by zizlo

    Don't be afraid..... :)