by Finalgravedigger Sep 9, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Puzzle of the mind |
Ah, the battle of the mind and heart- what are we to do? that would be a cool dream to have- a walk into ourselves...wish I could do that. |
by Nix
Idea for this poem is excellent. I think that rhyming seems little forced and that leaves bad impression but all in all great poem, Very original and you created excellent rhythm in this piece. Well done! |
by Tabitha
Great poem! great title! i loved everything about this poem and i wouldn't change one thing. keep up the good job! |
by Nebula
This is great, very clever. Its just like wondering through the mind with twists and turns, images jumping out at you... well done! |
by chind
Oh wow thats awesome man |