Saving Me

by Wake   Sep 9, 2007


With broken wings
i was falling apart
Lost everything.
Wringing onto my heart.
. I had lost it all
. and i hit the ground.
. wondering why it felt
. like i was still falling down.
Had lost the wish to live
as soon as i crashed and burnt.
Found myself alone
unknown and hurt.

Then i saw her face
eyes blue like an ocean , hypnotizing.
She flew down to me
her presence , mesmerizing.
. Then everything went numb
. and it was easy to tell.
. That this was the love
. that could pull me from hell.
She touched my heart
as if washing my sins.
I couldn't believe how the devil
could be devoured from within.

Then she took my hand
and pulled me off the ground.
Don't know how -high- i was
i never looked down.
. She glanced down at me
. as i looked high above.
. "Tell me its not a dream, Angel
. Tell me I'm really in love."
Above the clouds we flew
higher and higher we went
All i ever wanted to know
was that this would never end.

I suddenly woke up
my wings still in place
Staring right in my eyes
her gentle touch on my face.
. She spoke in a soft voice
. "Thank God You're Still Alive"
. The pills then put me back to sleep
. as I gave out a sigh...
Knowing i almost died and
realizing how fortunate i am
and went back into my dreams with her
in our own promised land.

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Written by Wake

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  • 17 years ago

    by Janessa

    Really great poem i loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Shama

    Hey... was rhis really ur xperience? cos if it was wen I read this, \i felt it too.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tru

    Very nice, I had a friend that almost died the same way. I hope that you didn't try and do this, and if you did I hope you know there are a lot of things in life worth living for. 5/5 Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Katelyn

    Wow rly rly rlyliked it A LOT! absolutely wonderful poem, ur an awesome writer, keep it up!

    .:Katelyn:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Aww! This is beautiful. This grl would be lucky. This poem expresses your feelings so perfecly. 5/5