Darkness With All Lights On

by The Only Mistake   Sep 9, 2007


As I woke up in this shady place
Looked around, only mass-craze
Don't be bothered to trust me
As you will always will be to blind to see

Put me to shame
I will play along to this game
Silently I make noise
Because you leave me no choice

Why is it that you lack insight?
Is all the darkness too bright?
One of these days it will become
Wanted by all, needed by some

I need room, room to get away
Just listen to what I have got to say
Searched all my life for the end
Grasped it for a moment, but away it went

One day I will kick down all walls
Live to the moment until destiny calls
Waited until the day that I understood
I did everything I could

Your world is different from mine
Darkness and sunshine
The mistakes we made were nothing
In darkness with all lights on, I stood looking

*Thank you*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow a beautiful write. very dep and filled with many emotions. you have a very unique writing style. i love your work.

    Your world is different from mine
    Darkness and sunshine
    The mistakes we made were nothing
    In darkness with all lights on, I stood looking

    that was my favorite stanza. it was a great ending. i feel i understood this poem right from the start. excellent job. you should really think about writing more, your good at it. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    AMAZING POEM I LOVED IT 5/5 INDEED...

  • 16 years ago

    by Scared to say I LOVE YOU

    I love this!!

  • 16 years ago

    by aMBerERiN

    This poem is really good, keep up the great work!! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow this is really good and i love your word choices you use its really good. 5/5
    kasia

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