Great poem! The descriptions and imagery used was amazing. It created such a vivid picture in my mind. I also liked the structure.
Seems like you enjoyed your vacation :)

Take Care! 5/5

-Shannon <3

This is wonderful. The vocabulary and imagery
was on point. [: A great little write to script onto
postcards! Sounds like a nice vacation.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Wow this was really good. i could really pictute all of this happen. wonderful job. great flow and nice rhymes. 5/5