Just Another Face

by Rachel   Sep 10, 2007


As you walk into a room
I notice right away
My smile begins to grow
Cant think of words to say

Then I'm walking down the hallway
When suddenly I see
Your gorgeous face appear
And its all quite clear to me

The thing that hurts the most
Is the thought I cant erase:
You cant even see me
I'm just another face

You look at all the other girls
The way I look at you
But I know you'll never realize
That I love you the way that I do

You think that I just want
To simply be your friend
I'd admit that it was more
But its too much to comprehend

So I'll try to keep my distance
Keep living without being seen
In hopes that some day you'll realize
How blind you've always been

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    Hi this is jenna the one u left the comment 4. i just read this poem for u and i can really relate too it, if this actually relates to how u feel in real life, i kno exactly how u feel

    -jenna

    keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    WOW!!!! I LOVE this poem... i can relate to this.... keep up the good work... you got talent 5/5

    xoxoxo
    Jess

  • 17 years ago

    by John Bowlby

    Wow, very well written! I love how you organized your words and strung it all together. I know the same feeling too. Keep up the great work! 5/5
    John

  • 17 years ago

    by TwilightSecrets

    It's perfect in my opinion. I am too mushy damnit, lol No, i think lots of people go through that expirence of liking a friend who looks at other not them and i think you expressed those feelings perfectly.

  • 17 years ago

    by likethewind

    Wow i loved it!
    you have serious talent!
    u r an amazing poet!
    5/5.
    keep up the great work!!!!! = )

    p.s. thanx for the comment on my poem!

    yours always
    oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

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