Ok i liked it but you need to add some things like commers, full stops.ok now that aside in one verse yyou need to drop a word

You look at all the other girls
The way I look at you
But I know you'll never realize
That I love you the way that I do

turn that in to this

You look at all the other girls,
The way I look at you,
But I know you'll never realize,
That I love you, the way I do.

Wow, this is amazing!
I love it.
The wording is perfect.
Keep writing!
5/5

Wow i loved it!
you have serious talent!
u r an amazing poet!
5/5.
keep up the great work!!!!! = )

p.s. thanx for the comment on my poem!

yours always
oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

It's perfect in my opinion. I am too mushy damnit, lol No, i think lots of people go through that expirence of liking a friend who looks at other not them and i think you expressed those feelings perfectly.

Wow, very well written! I love how you organized your words and strung it all together. I know the same feeling too. Keep up the great work! 5/5
John

WOW!!!! I LOVE this poem... i can relate to this.... keep up the good work... you got talent 5/5

xoxoxo
Jess

Hi this is jenna the one u left the comment 4. i just read this poem for u and i can really relate too it, if this actually relates to how u feel in real life, i kno exactly how u feel

-jenna

keep up the good work