Wow! you have some very deep insights here.

I really like the repeats in the first and last stanza and the slight changes that build on the meaning.

I've never thought so seriously about my tears and why I cry.

Great work!

Beautiful expressed poems you penned here, flow well yet sending good message, Awesome!

Wonderful poem Timothy. I would have put the second stanza last, because it's particularly strong, but I'm not the writer :-D

Beautifully written. This piece had a nice flow and I loved the emotions.

Great Job

Cicely

Love It!! Excellent Work!!

5.5**
<3

Couldnt have worded it out on paper better myself...

Interesting poem, it is really original. You expressed emotions excellently and created great rhythm in this piece. Well done!

WOW!!! I love the way you ended this piece. What a beautiful write! So inspiring...I wanted go sit in the confessional booth right now! HAHAHAHA Ok...seriously...VERY NICE WRITE!!!! And it HAS been too long! :)

Great job Timothy, I often wonder what tears mean myself. Keep up the great work. Regards, T.S.

Wow the art of crying such a great title with a poem to match 5/5

This is a great piece. A smooth flow and I like the rhyme scheme (especially the unusual rhyme of 'cosequence' and 'penance'). Repeating the first two lines of the first stanza as the first two lines of the last stanza works very well here, underlying the message and meanings of the words with a subtle power. This piece really says a lot in just four stanzas-it goes much deeper into the truths of life in so many ways. Love the title.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Wow amazingly written
keep it up!
-Lisa

5/5 of course!!! Loved the rhymes!!!

Beautifully written, I applaud both your use of repetition as well as your skill.
Just exquisite, I couldn't express my liking enough~
=^^=
5/5, keep up the great work!

Wow...
This piece left me speechless...
It has some deep inner beauty and wisdom between the lines. The emotions are excellently expressed in the whole poem, and you did great job with rhymes.
The ending stanza left the biggest impression on me, it is so effective!

P.s- Thanks for the dance :)

What a beautiful deep poem.
Great flow.
The last stanza was amazing.
Loved reading it.
Take care