Wow. good.. i loved it

This was really sweet Jason, but I think you need to add a little more emotion to it. When reading this it was like reading something that you were force to write. Don't get me wrong sweetie, I liked the concept of the poem and the whole meaning behind it; I just think that you should open up a little more and elaborate more on the meaning of the poem with more emotion. That is only a minor problem, other then that I thought that it was beautiful. I hope my honesty doesn't upset you. because honesty is the best policy. 4/5

Hugs and Kisses
Letty

Loved it it's so true...theres not much truth around these days...its gr8 keep it up
hugz and kissz
Ally
xxox