My Beautiful Disaster...............

by Malini Nair   Sep 10, 2007


Tragedy strikes again,
Tried finding comfort
In unbearable pain,

Tried to make it logical,
But when it reappears
I tend to get Hysterical,
And still say
Love could prove to be magical

thought you were
the right kind of wrong
Someone to whom
i could truly belong

Now i need
to get out of bounds,
It pains more
To live in doubts

Live in my shell
Nothing but remorse
Filled in to tell
Life could turn
Into a disasterous hell

Make up for a laughter,
but wounds don't heal faster
All i can say is
You wil continue living
Like my beautiful disaster....

Pray for a miracle,
Tend to get myself on the shickle
Thoughts of past days
Though painfully tickle

Remain happy
Thatz All now i want
From you

Remain Behind......
When the past might
Painfully Unwind

Will hold on
Through the
Tears and laughter
Cause you will remain
My beautiful disaster............

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  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    Really good! I love lines 3 - 6. The rhythm gets a little bit confused now and then, like in stanza 5. The penultimate line of that stanza maybe needs a bit of a mess around with? It ruins the rhythm a little. Loved it though! xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good one... nice to read...

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I loved reading every line, a very good poem by you!
    Keep them coming.

    Best wishes,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by amima hussain

    I luv it

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    A w00-h00 @ this one..
    a very sad write this, but amazingly done
    superbly expressed..and an awesome job of expression..
    loved the last stanza.
    simply, Loved it !
    Keep it coming. :D

    ~Wake~