by Malini Nair Sep 10, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Tragedy strikes again, |
by Emma
Really good! I love lines 3 - 6. The rhythm gets a little bit confused now and then, like in stanza 5. The penultimate line of that stanza maybe needs a bit of a mess around with? It ruins the rhythm a little. Loved it though! xxx |
by Sourav
Good one... nice to read... |
by Ingrid
I loved reading every line, a very good poem by you! |
I luv it |
by Wake
A w00-h00 @ this one.. |