Comments : Loving you today

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    I could really relate to this write...

    jus one suggestion...i think it would read easier if you made one small change to this secondline

    loving you yesterday
    is so easy to do,

    maybe

    loving you yesterday
    was so easy to do,

    other than that this poem brought back fond memories for me...of someone i have lost contact with...my first love....we had good times and bad.