Then i love your poem not only bcoz its nice bt also that its contain something tha also happened to my own life, i know how hurt it is to lose someone u love and especially if she broke your heart, i put this one to my favourites Mack its perfect, furthermore u have a skill on poems if u continue write i swear u'll be the best.

ReallY aN interestinG piecE of worK... yoU deservE foR thiS writinG..