by NyellMoonlight Sep 10, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Shield me with all twisted moments, |
Wow, wow, wow, last stanza is incredible... You express things amazingly with superb choice of words. |
by Marc Ortiz
That was amazing, one of the best dark poem I have read in a while, well done. I really LOVE your choice of words. the flow was flawless, good job. |
by Cella Bella
I loved the vocab here and the way you used them was perfect. The poem is very dark and beautifuly penned. 5/5 |
by Corinne
Very well done. What stands out for me in the piece is the sound of the words themselves. They sing. |
by Jenni Marie
This is beautifully written...i love the imagery you created in this, it creates very vivid pictures for the reader. flow is perfect throughout the piece and i thought the ending was perfect. elegantly written. |