by Mack Bopape Sep 10, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
If I was able to bring back the dead |
Hey Mack, this is a fantastic, but a sad poem. great job indeed! this poem is the same applied to my one's, "i can't believe you are gone", which i dedicated it to my Step grandad. you can read it when u have time and also read all my poems in particular. i will read yours all and give you feedback. |
WoW! wonderfuL expressionS witH excellenT feelingS....5/5 |
by njabulo b
Ops! Mack this is a nice sad poem im not returning the favor but im saying the true, its so sad what happened with uncle and i can feel the pain u feel ''If I was able to bring back the dead |