Ops! Mack this is a nice sad poem im not returning the favor but im saying the true, its so sad what happened with uncle and i can feel the pain u feel ''If I was able to bring back the dead
You would be the first one to comeback
If I was able to see into the future
I would have spent your remaining time with you
If I was able to stop the unstoppable
I would have stopped you from dying

thats the line i love the most.

WoW! wonderfuL expressionS witH excellenT feelingS....5/5

Hey Mack, this is a fantastic, but a sad poem. great job indeed! this poem is the same applied to my one's, "i can't believe you are gone", which i dedicated it to my Step grandad. you can read it when u have time and also read all my poems in particular. i will read yours all and give you feedback.

cheers!
mpho 'the poeple's poet' Ramoshaba