Suicide

Good peom, its sooo sad. I can relate to it too..keep up the good writing! (And hope you really don't feel like dying!) If you need to talk i'll listen!

Awww, this poem is sad...i can relate to it too. you wrote it with such emotion. good job. *hug*

InterestinG tO reaD, excitinG tO seE thE sounD oF youR truE knowledgE, alL iN alL, you'rE a lovelY poeT..... keeP uP youR writinG anD brinG morE excitinG poeM iN futurE... 5/5

Really really strong, although it ends to fast, try use methaphors as well I'm sure you can pull of alot more than u think :D
regards Arun

Aww! DON'T DIE I LOVE YOU! -snuggles- ^-^
I'll be ya buddy! talk to me about it!