Aww! DON'T DIE I LOVE YOU! -snuggles- ^-^
I'll be ya buddy! talk to me about it!

Really really strong, although it ends to fast, try use methaphors as well I'm sure you can pull of alot more than u think :D
regards Arun

InterestinG tO reaD, excitinG tO seE thE sounD oF youR truE knowledgE, alL iN alL, you'rE a lovelY poeT..... keeP uP youR writinG anD brinG morE excitinG poeM iN futurE... 5/5

Awww, this poem is sad...i can relate to it too. you wrote it with such emotion. good job. *hug*

Good peom, its sooo sad. I can relate to it too..keep up the good writing! (And hope you really don't feel like dying!) If you need to talk i'll listen!