Cross Of Fates [Collab]

by Boy   Sep 10, 2007


At many ups and downs of life;
There stood a shadow by my side.
A friend but an angel for me,
Now its clear for everyone to see.

Where delusive smirks deceive;
Innocent souls to diverge completely.
When everything is hard to believe,
A shattered heart took my back sweetly.

Every time that things are going to be tied;
Showing me the eyes of caring light.
To have someone always spreading arms,
It's making me feel friendship charm.

Two arms to cry on, one heart to share;
All I have for you, nothing as plurality.
In every petty handicap I will dare,
For you till I lose all my individuality.

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This is a collab with Laura aka Tricky Daze..You can check her out at .'my author link'

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=277294

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  • 17 years ago

    by Grey Ajurahck

    This is a wonderful collaboration-congratulations to you both. The use of language is excellent, the rhyme scheme is unique and it flows nicely. But it is the meaning of the poem that really shines through.

    Peace,

    Grey Ajurahck

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Hassan
    It is so nice to have a friend like this in your life.

    At many ups and downs of life;
    There stood a shadow by my side.
    A friend but an angel for me,
    Now its clear for everyone to see.

    These lines are very good.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Segun

    This is so amazing, wonderfully written and full of emotions. doing a collab was'nt an easy thing. This poem is one of the best i've read so far. Keep it up. Regards to Laura.

  • 17 years ago

    by Patience

    Well done. I think you both did an amazing job with this collab. Great job.

    Cicely

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    WonderfuL writinG, excellenT feelingS, beautifuL commentS abovE, manY greetingS foR youR sincerR feelingS...

    moreoveR...... somE oF thE besT oneS haD giveN theiR commentS tO yoU... itS a pleasurE... anD interestinG.... sO, includE mE alonG witH thosE professionaL authorS indeeD..

    luzaN

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