by XBroKenXyetXHeReX Sep 10, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
You say I dont respect you |
by Nix
You used some words too many times and that left bad impression for me. I like the topic but atmosphere could be more powerful and without the repetition of words you would express your emotion better. |
by NoSurvival
Amazing!! |
by Jade
Great poem. I like it a lot. |