It's A Long Trip Alone

by my brother is jesus Ive denied your Rapture   Sep 10, 2007


It's A Long Trip Alone is playing from the radio
She knows what she needs to do
with each beat of the song
it becomes more true
her life has gone on to long to be unloved
she counts every ribs that she sees in the mirror
she doesn't see any, yet there are eight that can be clearly seen by you and me.
She's brought on a new meaning to skin and bones
just trying to fit in just trying to be like her idols on TV
She doesn't feel any love from her boyfriend or life
it would be better to end it all tonight.
writing her letter on the mirror
the one thing she always dreaded the most.
So many people just didn't understand
these pressures that she had to go through
Keeping it short and sweet, she writes
" I don't deserve what God has given me, I don't deserve to be alive. Tonight I do what I deserve, I deserve to die."
Before she climbs into the tub, she turns the radio up.
She takes her razors and silts her wrists, her blood pours into the drain.
The last thing she hears is Dierks Bentley on the Radio singing "It's A Long Trip Alone."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    Omg....im in class right now, and i just started crying a little....omg that was a very very good poem 5/5

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