Defeated by a shadow

by jasmine   Sep 10, 2007


I run through blinding darkness
fear tearing at my legs
creeping up my spine
i stumble along the rutted path
weighed down by the constant throb
of my conscience
my legs pump
searing pain
seeing stars oblivious to all else
i streak towards your silhouette
on the distant horizon
eternity stretches before me as a ruler
burning a deep scar on my soul
the cruel heavy air forces me to grazed knees
defeated before your shadow

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  • 16 years ago

    by silvertung69

    WOW!!!!! That was vary good.
    I'm still fighting that same shadow...

  • 17 years ago

    by divine divinity

    I really love this, your very talented.

  • 17 years ago

    by shadowknight

    Wow. that was so powerful and well descripted. i think that is absolutely awsome.
    5/5

    Wow