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by TillyMariex Sep 10, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
You may say i need help but i assure you that I'm sane you think i want attention but my heart is filled with pain the voices in my head they told me to grab the knife the voices in my head they told me to end my life of course i listen to them they are my true friends they only want whats best for me so i guess this is the end they told me you wouldn't love me forever and it turned out they we're right i shouldve listened to them maybe i wouldn't be crying so hard at nightso for now on i shall do exactly what they say please don't get too close to me its better off that way the voices in my head they told me to grab the knife the voices in my head they told me to end my life now my lifeless body is waiting to be found the voices that were once inside my head laugh at the dead girl laying on the ground
by Alysha
Wow!! that was good as it flowed really well and yeah i agree i like the ending well done!! i loved it <3
by Kyle
Wow!! this poem was awesome!! good job!!! it flowed great and it was kickass