Yes! can Relate with the family thing! :)

This poem is like a wake up call to everyone who reads it (atleast that's what I think) that our world is falling apart everyone is trying to do what they believe the world wants but it ends up hurting everyone in the end... i really loved this one great job

Great poem.
i really like it. i can definitly relate.
our world has been so corrupted.
5/5.

Very well written poem Damont. :] I could relate to this. I think this would be a cool rap/song. lol If you could do that. :P
Keep it up!
Ciao<3