by Chelsey Sep 10, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
If love had a first name, I'd give it yours |
by dora
Hey chelsey! grea poem! very sweet and i love that way you structured it. keep it up! 5/5 xo. |
by Elizabeth
Wow, that was amazing ... also, so very true; to be that in love; to smile when ur partner smiles; to cry when ur partner cries, it's truely an amazing feeling ... good job! 5/5, no doubt. |
by debbylyn
Perfectly captures the essence of love in a very cute way....love it!!! |
by C Cattaway
I am in awe of how you used the word 'verb' and made it fit!! A true artist, with words! As for the whole poem itself, it is so wonderful, and happy, and complete, like the love it speaks of. Fantastic.. truly fantastic. xx |
Hi Chelsea, long time no see, I loved this poem, it has a great title, and every word flowed beautifully. Kudos and nice to be here again,. Timothy r |