by BlueDreams
Chel, what a beautiful expressed emotions you penned here, just something like i could say something.... it's something special....Brilliant! "If love had a first name, I will love the world the way it is, cause I can clearly see. That all the things I judge are done, by people just like me. So 'till the birth of peace on earth, that only love can bring. I'll help it grow, by loving everything." |
by Cuddles
Chelseythis is beautific perfection, and it's exactly the way I feel about my fiance who is sitting right beside me. I read it to him and...okay, I'm at a loss for words. I love this so much, Chels! |
Hi Chelsea, long time no see, I loved this poem, it has a great title, and every word flowed beautifully. Kudos and nice to be here again,. Timothy r |
by C Cattaway
I am in awe of how you used the word 'verb' and made it fit!! A true artist, with words! As for the whole poem itself, it is so wonderful, and happy, and complete, like the love it speaks of. Fantastic.. truly fantastic. xx |
by debbylyn
Perfectly captures the essence of love in a very cute way....love it!!! |
by Elizabeth
Wow, that was amazing ... also, so very true; to be that in love; to smile when ur partner smiles; to cry when ur partner cries, it's truely an amazing feeling ... good job! 5/5, no doubt. |
by dora
Hey chelsey! grea poem! very sweet and i love that way you structured it. keep it up! 5/5 xo. |