This poem tells a story of truthfulness in every way. No one ever seems to notice how much they can hurt someone when they leave them hurt and broken. I think this is a pretty goo poem. Keep it up and you might get better even though there's not much to get better at. I hope to see more poems that tell a true story of the pains of love and maybe even some happy love poems too.

All My Luck,
Latosha

This is a really awesome poem..I like it so much..Iadded it to my favorites.

Keep it up

:)