by my name is Llama Sep 11, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Strong, irresistible impulse to travel by |
by Vanessa
I am not usually into nature poems but this was diffrent, the word choice was descrpitive, and vivd, and the vocab was excellent, and the flow was perfect. again 5/5 for a job well done |
by ANDRE AQUINO
I like this one, it is really greatly written and deep. 5/5 |
by Sherry Lynn
I had to read this several times, but I like that in a poem. I like that it is thought provoking and actually makes you think. Though the reader can come to many different conclusions that is what poetry is all about. |
by Fsams
Wow unique wordings and beautiful flow. I really loved the way you ahve strung the words. All beautiful lines :) |
Really well done. Very descriptive and it definitely painted a lovely picture..I liked how it was like memory flashes of a persons life and they were looking back on it prepared for the next great chapter. Great job and keep it up! |