Comments : Wanderlust

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i'm not usually into nature poems, but this was great, the descriptive words were awesome and it brought a perfect picture to my head, nice work

    the night stars mirror the atmosphere; the soul.
    Closing the album of her past without hesitation.

    loved those lines ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Descritpive poem that was well penned and flowed beautifully, such awesome imagery portrayed too.
    love always
    Tara-Kay
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Really well done. Very descriptive and it definitely painted a lovely picture..I liked how it was like memory flashes of a persons life and they were looking back on it prepared for the next great chapter. Great job and keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow unique wordings and beautiful flow. I really loved the way you ahve strung the words. All beautiful lines :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I had to read this several times, but I like that in a poem. I like that it is thought provoking and actually makes you think. Though the reader can come to many different conclusions that is what poetry is all about.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by ANDRE AQUINO

    I like this one, it is really greatly written and deep. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I am not usually into nature poems but this was diffrent, the word choice was descrpitive, and vivd, and the vocab was excellent, and the flow was perfect. again 5/5 for a job well done