Comments : The pleasure/pain of the change

  • 17 years ago

    by Elapsed

    An awesome write.. thrilling.. bone chilling.. kept me on the edge of my seat the whole way through.. Great Job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    The change is completed,
    a pleasure far beyond any humans can know,
    ready to leap through the air and run wild
    and taste the winds of the night.
    ^I don't like this stanza and I also don't like the last sine.
    Rest of this poem is great, it has excellent imagery and you made some special rhythm, it really has incredible atmosphere. I like how you painted story with words and this poem has some interesting emotions. Well done, it deserves 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Great poem, really well written

  • 16 years ago

    by FallingPieces

    I love your comments..they are the best ;) keep it up