by Twisted Heart Sep 11, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
From far away she felt his stare |
Impressive. I like the imagery which makes this effective and the word choice added something to it along with the flow. I think the second stanza stands out more to me than the others yet altogether each adds another aspect to this piece. A different structure and style that was used effectively. |
by *Charisma*
Awww....what a sweet Prince Charming, Happily-Ever-After feel to it. I really liked it! Good job! |