Awww....what a sweet Prince Charming, Happily-Ever-After feel to it. I really liked it! Good job!
Charisma*

Impressive. I like the imagery which makes this effective and the word choice added something to it along with the flow. I think the second stanza stands out more to me than the others yet altogether each adds another aspect to this piece. A different structure and style that was used effectively.
~Faith-less