It breaks my heart to see you this sad, my sweet friend.
I hope that in the end we will both have our sweetheart an be happy until the end of time.
Don't loose hope, bear, I won't either!

xoxo,

Ingrid

*Big, huge hug* I hope that this isn't a sign as to how your doing my dear friend =(

But as to the poem it's self, I love it, understand the loneliness and pain flowing through it and the imagery was fantastic *like always* ^_^ Another great work that flowed from your fingers ^_^ 5/5
Lots of hugs, Rhea

God i love you buggers!!! hehe

Your ability to write so well amazes me, your poem has so many levels.

Some nice imagery though I guess the repetition was effective I did not overly like it. But it did work for this piece. I like the line "Scorching night heat" as it uses night and heat...which can be seen as two contrasting forces. Overall the structure worked and the imagery was good.
~Faith-less

This brought tears to my eyes. Very heartfelt.

Eyes losing sight,
life spiraling... losing the light.

These lines really cut to the heart.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

When feelings of depression overcome us we are forced to deal with the pain of everything going wrong in our life. You have pinpointed depression and death in my opinion. Longing for the death to take you and free you from the depression.

Sam
Congrats for this being one of the picks for featured writer of the week for R.T.V.W
Take Care
Cindy